Week 11 - Lasers Shooting at Y-Wing

During the middle of week I created another video for my animation. This time I created a scene in which the lasers that were from the Tie Fighter (previous blog entry) are now shooting at the Y-Wing. Here is the original video below: 

Evaluation:

Positives:

• Background is clear and not pixelated.
• Lasers are consistent with them all being the same colour as one of my other scenes that I had created for the animation.
• Cameras location is good because it shows the point of view from the laser. This shows I have used a range of camera angles.
• Shows the ship is actually moving rather than it being still. Moves forward and also rotates.

Negatives/Improvements:

• The back of the Y-Wing looks quite plain so it needs a bit more colour and material added to it.
• The back the Y-Wing also needs some engine lights to show that it's moving.
• The ship is too wobbly and rotating side to side too much so instead I want to improve it by actually moving it side to side as well as rotating slightly. 

Improved Video:

This is the improved video.

I have improved the moment of the ship and it even dodges one of the lasers. I added lights and a new material to the back of the ship as well.

I think this looks much better than the original.